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Lenny of Cohen
Apr 25, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

I Would Castrate

to abuse
to humiliate
and intimidate

to enjoy inflicting pain
shows me you are sub human
a monster who knows no shame

if I had my way
I would castrate
those who choose
to abuse and humiliate

I would castrate those
who intimidate

if I had my way
I would castrate
those who enjoy inflicting pain
to whom this is but a game

your actions tell me
you are sub human
you are a monster
who knows no shame

Lenny Gazbowski(C)2010

— Lenny of Cohen, Apr 25, 2010

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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Wow Lenny

Your write here I am glad I am not a man. LOL. I just wanted to pop in and say hello, been wondering how you are doing and hope all is fine with you. I see your still writing so that is a good thing. Wishing this finds you happy and healing Love, Mona xoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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Lenny of Cohen

16 years 3 months ago

I'm always writing!

sometimes just inside my self and other times on my pc. Mona, I'm hobbling along! But with a smile! Love, Light and Laughter to All Beings Namaste, Lenny
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Lenny

Brilliant poem .... too many people like playing games with others minds .... if I had my way I would castrate those who enjoy inflicting pain to whom this is but a game your actions tell me you are sub human you are a monster who knows no shame my favourite lines love and hugs JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
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Lenny of Cohen

16 years 3 months ago

JayCee......

thanks for your words! Always appreciated! Love, Light and Laughter to All Beings Namaste, Lenny
Ladderwords

Ladderwords

16 years 3 months ago

I enjoyed this poem. Using

I enjoyed this poem. Using castration, easily one of the most humiliating and abusive ways to destroy a man, against monsters "with no shame" who would easily do the same, sets up a superficial hierarchy and then gloriously tears it down.
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Lenny of Cohen

16 years 3 months ago

Glad you

enjoyed! Appreciate your comments. Love, Light and Laughter to All Beings Namaste, Lenny
Ladderwords

Ladderwords

16 years 3 months ago

I enjoyed this poem. Using

I enjoyed this poem. Using castration, easily one of the most humiliating and abusive ways to destroy a man, against monsters "with no shame" who would easily do the same, sets up a superficial hierarchy and then gloriously tears it down.
loved

loved

16 years 3 months ago

castration

please rethink all men inflict pain with pleasure u needn't punish them or all will need casrattion and who will then handle em all .. girls i mean then after castration there will be no fall no snow after all
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Lenny of Cohen

16 years 3 months ago

I am happy

to stay with my original version. I may play around with this in the future, or it may give birth to another bastard child. I am in no rush! Your input is appreciated. Love, Light and Laughter to All Beings Namaste, Lenny
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Mariposa

16 years 3 months ago

Great writing

Good pacing, rhythm, delivery, punch. I have to object, though, to the use of more violence as an answer to violence, though I've defintiely been in your position! Keep on healin', Namaste to you too, Jhena
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Lenny of Cohen

16 years 2 months ago

for monsters

who prey on children the punishment of castration is not in my opinion violence, it is merited, some even say that castration is not enough! For these monsters I would go further and hang them! Some twenty yrs ago I was involved in raising money for a victim of abuse, the age of the victim was 18 months - YES 18 MONTHS. I am still haunted by what happened to that poor baby. Thanks for your comments, much apreciated. Love, Light and Laughter to All Beings Namaste, Lenny
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barbsdad2003

16 years 2 months ago

Wow!

Your latest comment here certainly drives home the context for the write ... with a vengeance. I wonder at the ubiquity of psychopaths/sociopaths. Is the national/international density a factor of more recent times, or have we only recently been able to identify/diagnose such souls (if I can call them such). Monster is such a nice fit, nice moniker. (Unless, of course, it unfairly gives monsters a bad name, in which case apologies may be in order.) Please! do keep writing. On hot topics and all. Yours is a voice that should be heard. Thanx, Chuck

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