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Collision

Combination of force
Binding together
Wrapped like Christmas.

Entangled in intimacy
Transformed with lust
Empowered by heart.

Swaying like trees
Arcing like bows
Sweating like seas.

Heart beats
Legs connect
Arms envelope.

Moans burst out
Air thickens around
Temperature higher.

Emotions turn to action
Powerful movements
Relieving judgment.

Creation begins
Pulsation arising
Deeper feelings.

Take the steps one by one see where they lead, I know what you need.

— sunscreen, Apr 25, 2010

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Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 1 month ago

hmmmmm....

I like this poem. I'm not really sure why. I'll post a better comment when I am done thinking about it Love, Alice Carrying your own battle scars is a sign of your own strength. Carrying others battle scars is a sign of your very soul.
AS

Aireal Steed

16 years 1 month ago

Wow

I miss this conceded Alex. Were has your royal stuck up ness been? I know what you need, I love it. I know better, but love you always! Aireal=]
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks aerial, I know

Thanks aerial, I know you'd love this one, feel free to share it with Britney, I'm sure she will like it.
AS

Aireal Steed

16 years 1 month ago

=P

Stop spelling my name wrong!!! AIREAL!!!!
AS

Aireal Steed

16 years 1 month ago

oh shut it=pIt’s not

oh shut it=p It's not pointless, my name is my symbol. Something very special to me that should be spelt right.
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Hot very Hot

She's a lucky girl, your lady, Alex...great write. Rosina xena465