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Apr 24, 2010
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From The Crest Of The Moon
Oh I love you so much
You touch me in ways
That you can never know
I can’t dream about the moon
Without seeing you in the stars
You are so beautiful
In so many ways
I can’t decide
Why I love you most
Maybe it is your eyes
They are so soft and gentle
They melt me
Or maybe it is your wit
You are sharper than a knife
With humor that
Splits my sides
Maybe it is your adventure
You have traveled all around the world
And you have taken me with you
Or maybe just maybe
It is everything about you
Everything about you
Makes me love you
I am going to go rest
In the crest of the moon
Count the stars
And look into your eyes
— hobo, Apr 24, 2010
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Critiques
DawningDaytripper
16 years 1 month ago
Ah how romantic hobo! Nice
hobo
16 years 1 month ago
crest of the moon
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Love it, Love it
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Hello Hobo
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Hobo
ngaioBeck
16 years 1 month ago
Moonlight
hobo
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you
anonymous1
16 years 1 month ago
Title is great.
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
What a write
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
Ah the mooooon!