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From The Crest Of The Moon

Oh I love you so much

You touch me in ways

That you can never know

I can’t dream about the moon

Without seeing you in the stars

You are so beautiful

In so many ways

I can’t decide

Why I love you most

Maybe it is your eyes

They are so soft and gentle

They melt me

Or maybe it is your wit

You are sharper than a knife

With humor that

Splits my sides

Maybe it is your adventure

You have traveled all around the world

And you have taken me with you

Or maybe just maybe

It is everything about you

Everything about you

Makes me love you

I am going to go rest

In the crest of the moon

Count the stars

And look into your eyes

— hobo, Apr 24, 2010

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hobo

hobo

16 years 1 month ago

crest of the moon

Thank you so much for your comment. it will help me with the courage to post another lol
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Love it, Love it

Welcome to Neo dear friend. Who said romance was dead? Me...but you've changed my mind Hobo...great stuff*** Rosina xena465
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Hello Hobo

and welcome to the site. my favorite lines of this poem are: I am going to go rest In the crest of the moon Count the stars And look into your eyes Always, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Hobo

Welcome to Neopoet ... I like Cat loved those end lines ... look forward to reading more from you kind regards Jayne-Chloe Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
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ngaioBeck

16 years 1 month ago

Moonlight

I believe this is some of the most beautiful allegory I have ever read!
hobo

hobo

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you

Why thank you very much for such kind words my friend
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anonymous1

16 years 1 month ago

Title is great.

A sweet poem with lots said in a few choice words and ways. I really like this. 'I can't dream about the moon without seeing you in the stars' and 'I'm going to go rest in the moon, count the stars and look into your eyes' are wonderful poetic expressions. Thank you, Lisa
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

What a write

Just a lovely sentiment in this write. I love how you incorporated the moon and stars in your love for your love. I enjoyed this from start to finish and willvisit you again. Very soon. Bravo Love Magics02 xoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

Ah the mooooon!

I love this Hobo, another beautiful read, i am really enjoying your work. i send you a hug! shirley harrison