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poignancy ~ the last poem

green is inevitably misunderstood
when red is malnourished
and seeping into oblivion,
poets are a dying breed,
reluctant vampires
horrified of light,
indecent malcontents
once ripened flesh or
the flesh ripening
over sternum and breast,
visceral artists
cowering near holy water
and the fertile loam 
eroticism bares

who will drain this sea of recollection
when the last morning came?
so beautiful,
so very beautiful
so desolately beautiful
it made us hungry for the night

who will write these words
our muse left scattered
in our dread?

who will write a poem
to cure me of my poignancy,
bone-weary, lusting for life.



— Kailashana, Apr 24, 2010

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Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dearest Mum

I bow ... you are the mistress of words they do as you bid ... apprentice wandering in your wake ... drained or not this is brilliant love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x x Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

i like your style

you always keep me excited! shirley harrison
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 1 month ago

Reading this was a little strange

As your words resounded in my head I felt them slip over my thoughts as if they were my own especially the flesh ripening over sternum and breast, visceral artists cowering near holy water and the fertile loam I guess it might be called empathy on another level or just a universal connection but wow...powerful stuff. Thanks for sharing Seabhac