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POEM TO ROSINA FROM ANN.
"Poem to Rosina"
A Scottish maid with long blond hair,
lives high above the town, her poetry her joy,
her little Zak, her living toy,
her closest friend,
she weaves her tales from round about,
where life is hard, I have no doubt,
she is so caring, kind and wise,
you see it in her smiling eyes.
Once bogged down in misery,
she now sees light beyond the sky,
where inspiration lurks,
and with such pure compassion, for her fellow men,
she pens such words in hope of helping them,
from fear and trembling to find,
like her, a solace of some sort,
within her poems as they ought.
For there within each phrase, each word,
are gems of understanding,
and any drunk or swaying man,
can find a hand and holding tight,
can ride her words and gain some second sight,
into her mind so sympathetic,
so finely written and thought out
as that's her plan.
And we her colleagues listen on,
and know that they are helped for sure,
we know they are, they ask for more.
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
My dear sweet sister, It’s
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
This comment of yours Indi
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dearest Ann
loved
16 years 1 month ago
lovely poem like i sent one on behalf of all of us here
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
WoW, Shucks, Golly Gee!!!
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
One big kiss and a hug Rosina
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Love you too Ann
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
A Beautiful tribute
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Amen to that Shirley
manawa
16 years 1 month ago
a mighty cup of
DawningDaytripper
16 years 1 month ago
Ah what a lovely poem and
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks D.D.