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Apr 23, 2010
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From the Loved One
From the Loved One
Love is all I ask
God has been kind to me
For I have found lovers
Lovely lovers like thee.
My love is pure and sweet
When we, if ever do meet
Twill be a real treat
Till then my love is all
That you can relish and eat.
Love is all in my heart
Of loved ones alone
I am an inseparable part.
If you love me
God shall love thee
And when it’s me
I will be also be
Loved by you for free.
— loved, Apr 23, 2010
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Critiques
Shango007
16 years 1 month ago
Kinda saccharine, but it
loved
16 years 1 month ago
thanks
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Love is all you need
loved
16 years 1 month ago
ur kind
ziggy
16 years 1 month ago
hi a LOVELY read , there is
loved
16 years 1 month ago
thanks frnd