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THE MAN IN THE CAN
The man in the can is a selfish man,
isolated and incarcerated,
held captive by his own hand,
refused to learn from the past,
ignorant to bury the memory’s that last,
witch haunt’s and taunt‘s,
killing himself slowly, in a manner that holds fast
, he can’t worry about the future, or obsess about the past,
and must climb on a day by day path.
faster than the last, who thought drink slower from the glass, and these things will pass.
The man in the can at one time was a friend
before self-destruct mechanisms started to begin
born this way, like a machine to escape
emotional treason that helped make him this way
he sometimes wear’s a cape
with the letter H
this stands for help me before it’s to late
these dramatic scene’s that play out from time to time
are cries for help in his subconscious mind
those who know him think he’s blind
like he’s in denial of the fact that he’s running out of time
as the past sometimes repeat it’s self through hereditary lines
not seeing the light until he’s already blind
born in a prison
wanting to be free
complaining like a spoiled brat habitually
when the whole time i held the key
to my own sobriety.
Critiques
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
hello
thewaitingroom
16 years 1 month ago
WELL DONE AND PERFECT MY FRIEND!
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Yes it is great
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Jon
Nicole Stone
16 years 1 month ago
Hey babe, like the new
jon stone
16 years ago
I like it.