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The Midnight Dance


The night’s as hot as Hell.

                The distant thoughts of a memory that was.

                That never was.

Your silhouette still plagues those moments,

the moments between sleep and the sunless wake

 

Your perfume a ghost to me,

                intangible.

Yet raids me mercilessly with each breath

 

I feel your form under the coarseness of my hands.

                Skin like angels ought to feel.

                Illuminates the soul.

The need to breathe deep after each taste still burns,

                your lips ignite the undying flame

 

I stare the empty dark with a hope,

                a wish, a want.

To  taste what the gods put here only for me

 

To blast the grains of time between the then

                and the now.

 

… I count the grains.

                My arid desert of grains.

 

VNG 2010/02/09


— TheDarkOne, Apr 23, 2010

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 1 month ago

Hello Dark One...

I can feel the passion in your poem; like the pulse of a heart beating, inside your words... And it is exquisite! I will read this poem many, many times. I find it simply sublime. Gentle regards, Raven
Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

16 years ago

Well, I guess...

...that Ravenshakti has used the words I would have wanted to: exquisite, sublime and full of passion. This actually fits an emotion of love and loss very close to my heart - I'll say no more, but this write has become very special to me. You are fast becoming my favourite Neopoet...dark, lost and emotional. Keep them coming my friend I am enjoying dropping by your place, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".