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Treasure

My sons mow
on Sundays after church,
because, they tell me,
Sunday is the only day
not filled with things to do,

and so, on Sabbath,
grass grown
until it tufts untidy
in its length gets cropped,
shriven by two earnest boys

who push and aim the clattering
lawn mower
that smells of gasoline
old hay and afternoons
of sweating toil made light by youth,

until the task is done and
silence falls
across a new-made green
of emerald turf
filled with
scent of spring and satisfaction.

But the real prize appears
next day,
when in our sea of green
bright islands blaze out over all
in yellow gold of morning sun...

...who says
dandelions are not treasure?
— Race_9togo, Apr 23, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dearest Jim

I say with all seriousness this is the best poem I have ever read from you I could smell the fresh cut grass I could see the boys mowing cept I think mine are older than yours lol I have three ... and those end lines ... dandelions must be something the world over we get them here as well ... beautiful poem sigh love and hugs JayCee x x x Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks Jayne

I didn't really think that this was anything special, I just kind of ran it off the pen at speed real quick. Its good to know that I'm beginning to write well enough to go from pen to paper in one stroke! Glad you enjoyed it so much. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race