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Thoughts of a troubled mind

Trapped within a memory there is no place to hide
Thoughts taking over and being taken for a ride.
Mind so cluttered a whisper is like a shout
Wanting to escape but cant find the way out
No place for reality just questions as of why
Don't see an answer no matter how high that we fly
Confusion is the chaos that holds us to the ground
Symmetry but an illusion tied up and all bound
Needing a solution, isolation is not the key
Lost on a highway, an interpretation of me
Unmasking the problems is such a daunting test
Enterprise of will with a mind that wont rest
— AeonianSomerset, Apr 23, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Love it

You express your feelings really well in this poem...well done. Rosina xena465
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AeonianSomerset

16 years 1 month ago

thank you

is but a simple pleasure to have others enjoy a part of yourself
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thewaitingroom

16 years 1 month ago

Very nice!

A.K.A BITCHIN! VERY NICE MY FRIEND..................GOOD WORK! I LOVE YELLING LOL..
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AeonianSomerset

16 years 1 month ago

thank you

Glad you enjoyed it, maybe next time instead of writing i might just try this yelling thing you mentioned. could help. lol