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Apr 23, 2010
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Thoughts of a troubled mind
Trapped within a memory there is no place to hide
Thoughts taking over and being taken for a ride.
Mind so cluttered a whisper is like a shout
Wanting to escape but cant find the way out
No place for reality just questions as of why
Don't see an answer no matter how high that we fly
Confusion is the chaos that holds us to the ground
Symmetry but an illusion tied up and all bound
Needing a solution, isolation is not the key
Lost on a highway, an interpretation of me
Unmasking the problems is such a daunting test
Enterprise of will with a mind that wont rest
Thoughts taking over and being taken for a ride.
Mind so cluttered a whisper is like a shout
Wanting to escape but cant find the way out
No place for reality just questions as of why
Don't see an answer no matter how high that we fly
Confusion is the chaos that holds us to the ground
Symmetry but an illusion tied up and all bound
Needing a solution, isolation is not the key
Lost on a highway, an interpretation of me
Unmasking the problems is such a daunting test
Enterprise of will with a mind that wont rest
— AeonianSomerset, Apr 23, 2010
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xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Love it
AeonianSomerset
16 years 1 month ago
thank you
thewaitingroom
16 years 1 month ago
Very nice!
AeonianSomerset
16 years 1 month ago
thank you