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STRANGE INTIMACY

 
TOO HOT TO HANDLE
— Bonitaj, Apr 22, 2010

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Region, Country: Tip of Southern Africa, ZAF

Favorite Poets: Too many to narrow down, but briefly :, AUDEN, T.S. ELIOT, DICKENSON, RILKE, THOREAU, RUMI ... the list is endless. Am inspired by many, especially those that live lives of "quiet desperation, and go to the grave with a song still in them" (THoreau)

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Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 1 month ago

Indi

I always appreciate your astute comments - please don't think I took offense! Come back - all is forgiven! lol Boni
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 1 month ago

Oh, she could write the

Oh, she could write the magazine it sounds like, steamy stuff Boni! Way to write out some frusteration. What inspiration, lol. I just have to note though, that this kinda good sex is only acheived with the right chemistry, and I am going to guess not promoting causal sex. Bummer, I know. But coming from a been there done that point of view. Great sex comes with realy knowing someone. Does not diminish the passion in this write though! Good for the blood, keeps us movin! Julie D.D. Well there was that one time..... hehehehehe
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pamela

16 years 1 month ago

hot

Dear B., I thought it was wonderful. Everything flowed together perfectly. P.
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

CHALLENGE

I AM TOO HOT HOTTER THAN THE HOTTEST FLAME HAVE YOU RECENTLY HEARD OF THE VOLCANO THATS PUT YOU EARTHIANS TO SHAME I AM THAT HOT ..... JUST TRY ME OUT WHERE ARE YOU THERE SHOULD BE NO DOUBT.... LOvely poetry urs my heat is out the planes reume so also all the dames
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

I guess you...

You deleted this poem before I could read it? X-rated was it?...Da*...got here too late...re-post please? Rosina xena465
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 1 month ago

hey Rosina!

I have a reputation to uphold ;)! What was I thinking??? lol Could always send it to you privately ;) Just kidding - might muster the courage to come back with this one! Cheers Boni
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 1 month ago

ah Loved

always like the way you elaborate on something poetically - kinda takes the heat off of me ;) CHeers Bonita j
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 1 month ago

sorry Arrow...

That it is lol! perhaps it'll be even better next time! Cheers Bonitaj