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Two and Six
When two little girls look up at me
it can remind me how good life can be and when I hear their voices in play
I love the funny things, they often say.
They can be happy and sometimes sad
they can be good and they can be bad
and when they smile and ask me to play
how can I not, do what they say?
One of them is six, the other one is two
without them in my life, what would I do
and if they are sad, I wipe away their tears
ready to comfort them and take away their fears.
I hope they will love life’s simple pleasures
the stars, the sea, and all nature’s treasures
and know they are loved by you and by me
always in our hearts wherever they may be.
I wish them success in whatever they do
I wish them happiness all their lives through
and I wish them in life all that is good
but most of all, I wish them love.
Critiques
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Tim
Tim
16 years 1 month ago
thank you JayCee, you are
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Beautiful
Tim
16 years 1 month ago
thanks Rosina take care, Tim