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Two and Six

 

When two little girls look up at me

it can remind me how good life can be                                                                                                                                                                                             and when I hear their voices in play

I love the funny things, they often say.

 

They can be happy and sometimes sad

they can be good and they can be bad

and when they smile and ask me to play

how can I not, do what they say?

 

One of them is six, the other one is two

without them in my life, what would I do

and if they are sad, I wipe away their tears

ready to comfort them and take away their fears.

 

 

I hope they will love life’s simple pleasures

the stars, the sea, and all nature’s treasures

and know they are loved by you and by me

always in our hearts wherever they may be.

 

I wish them success in whatever they do

I wish them happiness all their lives through

and I wish them in life all that is good

but most of all, I wish them love.

 

 

 

 

 

— Timbo, Apr 22, 2010

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Country/Region: GBR

Favorite Poets: Rather than poets I tend to be influenced by songwriters and have a love of lyrics.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Tim

this is just wonderful ... I have one girl and three boys, well two men and a boy lol thanks for sharing this lovely tribute with us ... sigh love and hugs JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
Tim

Tim

16 years 1 month ago

thank you JayCee, you are

thank you JayCee, you are very kind to me. I have two grown up daughters but the poem refers to my granddaughters Bethan and Miriam. best wishes, Tim
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Beautiful

I love the flow and the rhyme...just the last line doesn't rhyme. Rosina xena465