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burn



only fools fall asleep
in the first suns days

the robins still singing
hopping for meals

and now this

"quit laughing its goddamn painful"

I smile at your beautiful skin
peeling like old parchment

"you should just curl around some
 stones like the snake and peel
 it off like a glove!"

"I'll peel you like a glove" and you
throw a pillow and then howl

oh my love I shall peel away
your forgetfulness

roll over now and lets start
the other side
thank goodness you had some
covering

the robin is still singing when
the dusk orb is golden
and heavy

when the cool cream and cloth'
do their magic

and sultry shadows
sink through the quiet house
and dreamplay rests
where needed

its safe its dark almost
and I can come out

night is my realm

— Esker, Apr 22, 2010

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dearest Esker

I can say you have bewitched me in your realm ... for you know how much I love night and I loved this one ... its my new favourite love and hugs JayCee x x x Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Sounds Heavenly

Lovely descriptions...sure sounds like you and the night were as one. I guess you had a nice time? Rosina xena465
Esker

Esker

16 years 1 month ago

ancient rites

worship the sun (for some) its soothing in moderate doses but dont forget UVs are very harmful i used to chose night becuase it was most calming and I had such distraction disorder i like socialness but sometimes its too anxious for me but I brown up with good exposure to Mr Solaire
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 1 month ago

The opening lines captured me

I expelled no breath until the end a wry smile upon my face Oh creature of the night my best wishes I send for your burnt body to mend Seabhac