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greeneyes
greeneyes
Apr 22, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A Visit From Beyond

Cold breeze lifts my hair
Like bathing in ice water
Shiver in my spine

— greeneyes, Apr 22, 2010

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Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Elizabeth

Another wonderful Haiku from your pen ... you really have a knack for them imho love and hugs JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
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lyz

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Elizabeth

Gave me a shiver. A visit from beyond, appropriate title. Wonderful. Love Lyz. XX
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

GLIMMER

GLIMMER I THINK ITS A CORRECT WORD IN UR EYES IF INCORrect do say i shall replace it as i don't like to shiver... its cold still out here. LOVED