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lou
lou

Fuck You Baby Blues


 

 


each morning when I wake
know that you have to leave

I examine your the structure of your back
need your sugar coated panacea for all my ills

heartbeat, reverberates the news
got the get out come back, fuck you baby blues

work all day, stand strong
a placebo for my will

each evening you walk  back in
your masculinity  thrills 

heartbeat, reverberates the news
got the get out come back, fuck you baby blues

shouldn’t let you back, should bar the door
got the shakes you’re in my veins

the cure for what ails me is at your finger tips
heal me

heartbeat, reverberates the news
got the get out come back, fuck you baby blues


— lou, Apr 21, 2010

About This Poem

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Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Lou

This poem should be a song. my favorite lines are: the cure for what ails me is at your finger tips heal me my aches and pains hearbeat, reverberates the news got the get out come back, fuck you baby blues (psst... hearbeat should be heartbeat) Always, Cat
lou

lou

16 years 1 month ago

hi

thanks cat