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Apr 21, 2010
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Fuck You Baby Blues
each morning when I wake
know that you have to leave
I examine your the structure of your back
need your sugar coated panacea for all my ills
heartbeat, reverberates the news
got the get out come back, fuck you baby blues
work all day, stand strong
a placebo for my will
each evening you walk back in
your masculinity thrills
heartbeat, reverberates the news
got the get out come back, fuck you baby blues
shouldn’t let you back, should bar the door
got the shakes you’re in my veins
the cure for what ails me is at your finger tips
heal me
heartbeat, reverberates the news
got the get out come back, fuck you baby blues
— lou, Apr 21, 2010
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Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Lou
lou
16 years 1 month ago
hi