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The Other Side Of The Mountain.

 

The Other Side Of The Mountain.

See the car parks

with their shiny new cars,

next to the sparkling new sports arena

and the smiling children,

excited about the game to be seen.

See the lovely girls

with their perfect faces

near the skyscraper buildings

that pierce the sky.

And how people pay so much

for something to eat,

in the expensive restaurants

always so full.

Look at the beautiful shops

full of wonderful clothes

and the children enjoying life

down at the beach.
 

But on the other side

of the mountain

a smile is hard to find,

As people try to survive life in a shanty town.

Children are wandering

alone in the streets,

sometimes with nothing

on their feet.

With sores that never heal

and hair that’s never clean

abandoned and hoping to be pitied

by the old lady

who takes in children,

on the other side of town .

Life is very different

on the other side of the mountain.

— Timbo, Apr 21, 2010

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Country/Region: GBR

Favorite Poets: Rather than poets I tend to be influenced by songwriters and have a love of lyrics.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Timwonderful poem and I

Dear Tim wonderful poem and I thoroughly enjoyed this one ... not that I dont enjoy your poems about your lovely wife ... there is the social aspect in this one , the dark and light in life wonderful write again ... only suggestion I would align it to the left side of the page its easier to read and doesnt look pushed around the page by your picture love and hugs JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
Tim

Tim

16 years 1 month ago

Hi Jaycee,thanks for a

Hi Jaycee, thanks for a lovely response, thought I'd better forward something a bit different this time. My write was prompted by a TV article about South Africa staging the football world cup and all the money involved, whilst there are children there living in poverty and risk of abuse. just a bit curious though, you mention my picture and I didn't know I had one there! When I did try to download a picture, I seemed to have been unsuccessful and as it doesn't appear on my screen, I am a little puzzled. take care Tim.
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hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

Another Great write

No mountains here, so I guiss I'm just from the other side of the tracks. It gives me more to write about. Take Care. huey
Tim

Tim

16 years 1 month ago

thanks for taking the

thanks for taking the trouble to comment Huey. I always appreciate it . Best regards Tim