loved

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Roses Never faDe

This piece has been updated again for uuuuuuu for the sake of other Roses ,who like me ....
have yet to read

Roses never fade

You can still see me

A natural unfadeable

Unfathomable

Fresh as the freshest

Rose.

I was initially born

As a rosE

Call me by any name

I shall remain

A softest
one
just a delicate one
a rose

I suppose…

I do hope
we all for ever shall
remain
like beautiful
ROSE...
loveliest
Lovedly
Lovely like A lovely rose...a rose...........a .rose

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www.triond.com
lovelyhoney

— loved, Apr 20, 2010

About This Poem

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Country/Region: ROU

Critiques

pamela

16 years 1 month ago

Dear L., I really

Dear L., I really enjoyed this piece. I liked the way you followed through with the thought. I especially loked the lines unfathomable, fresh as the freshest rose I suppose (could work here as well if you chose)Just a notion. Great job! P.

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

at times my mind creates beyond the limits of creativity and also i coin newer words too thanks

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Hello Loved

Very nice work here. It brought me a smile. I liked the same line as P. did. Always, Cat

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

at times my mind creates beyond the limits of creativity and also i coin newer words too thanks loved

greeneyes

16 years 1 month ago

beautiful is all i can think

beautiful is all i can think to say

Esker

16 years 1 month ago

Like the wording of this poem

you keep the theme good throughout and start and finish this without distractions and with good spacing "softest rose" Esker~

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Lovely

Your best one Loved...super Rosina xena465

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

thanks to all above thanks and regards come from my heart loved

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Loved

Your coming into your own voice in this poem ... bravo love and hugs JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

thanks a great deal loved

Nordic cloud

16 years 1 month ago

The falling petals reached my ears

Ann of Norway The petals reached my ears and on reading their sheen I liked what I saw, Ann

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

thanks u amaze me ma'am ur stars enlighten me and i love to ur remarks ccccccccceeeeeeeeee ur nay has yet not become aye i shall await..... for ur remarks there

loved

16 years 1 month ago

evolution

I consider it as an honour to be earmarked for Evolution thanks to you all

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

thanks i am loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

one star less anyway its ur judgement loved

ziggy

16 years 1 month ago

hi

hello the above comments say it all good write , do you ever intend to add to this one ,,zigs

loved

16 years 1 month ago

add

like what more ?? loved

ziggy

16 years 1 month ago

hi

lol , i never consider a poem completly done and dusted , i would rather write one complete remembered piece than a thousand poems that drift and fade , an old write can always become complete in a more rounded manner by returning downd the road , thats what i think at least ,,,zigs

loved

16 years 1 month ago

PROFOUND

Your thoughts are as rosy as rosy is my mind, where can I such lovely critics Like you find? Those who give five stars and give hope to add some more, of perfumed hope to a piece of rose perhaps half done but the rosy poem is complete my rose is as sweet as sweet as sweet AFTER THOUGHT So let it be some day twill another rose it be. perhaps a red one happy you must be. LOVED BY ONE AND ALL