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Apr 20, 2010
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MAMMA, MUMMY, MOM
MAMMA, MUMMY, MOM
The crescent of your smile,
reflects the moons new birth,
its fire, its quiet calm constancy,
its flash of love, its ever lit beauty,
round and whole in time,
denotes a grace, a peace, a joy
no pain can now destroy,
there on your face, my mother
mamma, mummy, mom,
so dear, so clearly meant for me,
your sonny, son, your little Joe,
the child who bit your toes when tiny,
now remembers you, as you lay lost
in some cruel grip of frosted pain,
so far, so high in skies of black,
so out of reach, so, so in need of me,
I bleat the sound of lambs,
and tears fall down my cheeks
as helplessly, I hold your hand
and smiling back at you,
I think you knew that I was there,
so quietly sobbing at your side,
ah would that I could touch once more your hand,
to show that I now, sadly, understand.— Nordic cloud, Apr 20, 2010
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Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dearest Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you sweet song of an Australian, Jayne.
pamela
16 years 1 month ago
gripping
greeneyes
16 years 1 month ago
ann
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
I agree
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
you made me cry
loved
16 years 1 month ago
we all learn
Mariposa
16 years 1 month ago
Lovely Ann,
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you Mariposa and Loved