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MAMMA, MUMMY, MOM

MAMMA, MUMMY, MOM




The crescent of your smile,

reflects the moons new birth,

its fire, its quiet calm constancy,

its flash of love, its ever lit beauty,

round and whole in time,

denotes a grace, a peace, a joy

no pain can now destroy,

there on your face, my mother

mamma, mummy, mom,

so dear, so clearly meant for me,

your sonny, son, your little Joe,

the child who bit your toes when tiny,

now remembers you, as you lay lost

in some cruel grip of frosted pain,

so far, so high in skies of black,

so out of reach, so, so in need of me,

I bleat the sound of lambs,

and tears fall down my cheeks

as helplessly, I hold your hand

and smiling back at you,

I think you knew that I was there,

so quietly sobbing at your side,

ah would that I could touch once more your hand,

to show that I now, sadly, understand.


 
— Nordic cloud, Apr 20, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dearest Ann

I leave my stars for the time being and my accolades ... beautifully written and I am sure Joe will love it as well I will return to this I need to ingest it some more love and biggest hugs JayCee x x x Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
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pamela

16 years 1 month ago

gripping

Dear A., I couldn't let go. This is a beautiful haunting piece. I especially loved the beginning, The crescent of your smile, reflects the moons new birth. Wonderful!and the ending, Ah would that I could touch once more your hand, to show that I now, sadly, understand. Inspired dear Ann. P.
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 1 month ago

ann

This was beautiful, your words are so spellbounding!
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

I agree

Very beautiful Ann Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

we all learn

MOMMY MOM MAMA MAMMA MUMMY We all learn from each other see! Lovely comments You now leave… We all love to share All that you do reveal As comments in poetry As does that one They call The Loved one That’s me [I]
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Mariposa

16 years 1 month ago

Lovely Ann,

When I read this poem so sad there were tears to be had very touching poem, I loved the line "cruel grip of frosted pain" Your friend in pen, Jhena