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Apr 19, 2010
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Bone to Bone
bridge of flesh
heaving machinery soft
the heartfelt sump
original drum
weight upon the buttons
with ear pressed
I can feel your voice
through my chest
this gas work sun
has glistened star
upon the words
you leave
here is wrist hinge
to sternum
the minimum of
skin
we can feel our structure
smooth and mortal
the wind is racing through
the limbs
the silhouette from
the light thown on
the blind
I can feel the thunder
arriving like a dream
across the lake
"Love me" you tell me
and the first raindrops
are scattering above
us on the rooftops
— Esker, Apr 19, 2010
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DawningDaytripper
16 years 1 month ago
Such a raw romantic! I love
whitetea
16 years 1 month ago
wonderful
Esker
16 years 1 month ago
drug is a poet
Electric Blue
16 years 1 month ago
Bone To Bone
Esker
16 years ago
the draw
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
Oh what a bridge, of flesh!! WONDERFUL