Drowsing for Madness

OK your going to find this even more bizarre the line about the fat rat eats cheese made me think of you lol cause I have nearly finished the cheese poem you asked me to write all thos months ago lol that seriously just spun me out lol wow Ann serendipity is at work again ;) haha love and biggest hugs JayCee x x x Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

I think when we ask for no crit at least an explanation is forthcoming and I will explain this one to you its about my illness as you might have guessed (A Parliament convenes outside a wise hoot of cacophony, now settling the night) )this stanza is an actual fact ... when I sat to write a heap of owls where outside hooting lol and a crowd of owls is called a parliment( inside, a chaos of fate continues )this ones self explanatory( a battle sags the sky above, and great half moon of fire bulges the stratosphere of each eye )the battle for sanity for people like you and me is constant and to stay on top of it we have to be vigilant as angels and demons( swoops of angels are forever in the pit, again’ demons from hell and while this curiosity takes center-stage in a despondent sight )this stanza the curiosity is my schizophrenia taking over( a fat rat eats cheese as a little old man teaspoons Pal on toast )the fat rats are docters eating the cream while insane little old men eat dog food( I dig my fallout shelter deeper into my psyche, )My battle station if you will to be ever vigilant not to get sick again( and wonder, if they will ever find my yellowing bones and drowse the essence of my madness and I have done as I twisted in her hold, and chewed off her face so I remember her taste is bitter and lifeless )and her is my madness ...( hope it explained it a little for you and I am glad you asked Love and biggest hugs JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

there are all types of fat cats on this planet in this case its the docters who take and give nothing for their ailing patients ... thanks for the read and the comment will go and have a look at your poem when I am finished here love and big hugs JayCee x x x Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

I appreciate the return comment but I do very much enjoy your poetry so the pleasure is all mine ... I am glad you liked this curious poem the explanation short is above in my reply to Cat if you interested thanks again for your lovely comment love and hugs JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

so very nice to see you again dear lady you ahve been missed .. I am very happy you liked this one ... I saw you had a new one in stream will be off to read you shortly love and big hugs JayCee x x Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

Smiles I do hope thats a good stunned, thanks though for the comment this one was one I had written and wasn't sure if I should post but here it is ... thanks again hugs love JayCee x x x Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

I know that your beast is a slightly different beast to mine so it might not all make sense to everyone ... but its one I felt I had to write and then had to decide whether to post lol thanks for the interest and the read love and big hugs JayCee x x x Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

my sister in ink ... you are never alone ... I am very happy you liked this one love in ink hugs JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

I think different on different days ... depends how my world is going lol ... but whatevers going on you can never loose hope in life ... ever ... thank you for the wonderful comment ... Pssst my book?, fingers crossed will be out in october november lol love and hugs JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll