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THREE SEEDS OF A FLOWER - Message to all

Three seeds of a flower
Wilt not stand alone this hour
A father and son together, as one
Awakens the flower of mornings sun

There is love and compassion
No empathy ever lacking
A father gives, unto his son
Liken a blossom, a flower begun

Three seeds are still there
Showering in loves spirited care
Gazing upon a blossom of two
Feeling her, watching over you

The love of a father, dedicated to his son
It all begins, the new day has begun
No other love so precious and true
Three seeds of a flower awakens with you

I send this poem to all of you
Prayers for healing, soon speed through
The love of a father taking care of his son
His gracious, compassion, together as one

For all your care and all your love
The Lord shines down from heavens above
A flower soon shall bloom
To soften days of doom and gloom

Mother is there too, with all her cares
She sees the burdens, which you now share
She is not there in person, she is not to-ground
Just trust in the Lord, her spirit's around

For there sprouts three petals
All the seeds have been settled
One from heaven, two others from earth
Three seeds of a blossom, a love from birth


My thoughts on this poem now.

This poem was written for a father tending a sick child.  Little did I know it was not the truth. I will not delete it as the story has been told so I dedicate this poem I wrote to any and all you single fathers who tend to their sick child, whether it be son or daughter.

  For in life there are many men that have had to take the responsibility of being the sole caretaker for their children after Mother has gone whether due to a divorce or a passing or abandament.  This poem shall stand on its own merit, only the dedication has been changed.  I would not be telling the truth if I said that this poem left me also speechless of it's comments but I want you all to know I appreciate how you critiqued this poem and not so much the actions of anyone here. 
  I have learned alot and the one thing for sure--- never to  disclose any personal information in a private message unless you know for sure that is the person to whom you really want to converse with. The internet is just that an inter net. Be careful in whatever site you visit and share.   This is now a closed chapter in my book and would like to personally thank each and every one of you for your genuine and heartfelt feedback of this poem. I did put my heart into it and it did sadden me a bit.  I hold no grudge, I hold no hate, for poems and stories I like to make. Whether from the heart or the mood, or just being me.
 
Let us go forward and continue the writing we are all here for. I thank you so much.

Love and Peace
Magics Mona
xoxoxo

— magics02, Apr 18, 2010

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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Rex is our new member here

Rex Mundi I love his work also. What did you like on the poem Annie. I just had a strong urge to write this piece, it is not as much sentimental as it is truth. I get emails from him and wanted to write this for him and his struggles in life and what he is going through. I am inspired with awe at a father who stays right besides his child every step of the way. Not many mothers and fathers are there for their children in this day and age, and when you see one that does you know that the love between them is just what we had when we were coming up. Thanks for stopping by Annie Loveya Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

If anyone

Would disguise this sweet man named Rex then I would just say the joke would be on them and not him. Do you mean to say Annie that people can come in here with two different names. HMMMMmmmmmmmmm dont give me any ideas. LOL and of course I would not be playing such a deceitful thing to anyone as that would be in not the best interest of many poets here, What you think. This man is not a imposter by no means whatsoever. I know it for a fact and I believe. I have allready seen the sheeps with all kinds of clothing in my life. Some dress up rather nicely too. Too tired now and good nite and have a wonderful week friend. Love, Mona xoxoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

lol

My mind is in a peaceful place tonight but boy last nite the nitemares were on. My poor Magic dog lost and me crying to find him and I will tell you the rest on another given day or night. LOL Love and Peace to you for a great week ahead!! Mona xoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks Ephy

No turning to another, Rex is a gentle man and I wrote this one for him and his son, I guess it could go to any father with sons too. I will write one for you special friend also, all in good time my pretty, all in good time. LOL I love your bottom comment here show me the way.......... very good very good Love you Mona xoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

What if Rex were Kal in

What if Rex were Kal in disguise? How would you feel? Smile Mona, God loves you. ~A Out beyond ideas of wrong-doing and right-doing, there is a field. I'll meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about. Ideas, language, even the phrase 'each other' doesn't make any sense. --Rumi
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Blazing Saddles

Kail This is a poem written for a dear friend. A truly nice person and I doubt seriously it is Kal in disguise. I hope I answered your question. Thanks for the visit. Mona
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

I am fucking stunned …

I am fucking stunned ... disgusted and stunned Mona I am sorry you were taken advantage of in this dishonest way ... for whatever reason ... its wrong ... JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Jayne,The lesson, as it

Dear Jayne, The lesson, as it were is *higher* than any method (in our minds dishonest, disgusting and stunning) used to teach it. Life itself is like that. As far as I know, we've all got the same exact life flowing through our veins. Love, Anna Out beyond ideas of wrong-doing and right-doing, there is a field. I'll meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about. Ideas, language, even the phrase 'each other' doesn't make any sense. --Rumi
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Anna

I got the lesson Its just not one I would practice ... but I have always said, to each his own ... I agree to disagree if we always agreed it would be fucking boring Love JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

That’s why I love Advaita,

That's why I love Advaita, nonduality.... Everything is true so none of it is. It's all ephemeral thoughts that we somehow make *ours*... Isn't life fucking awesome?????????????????????? Kal, I thank you for never disappointing me with your creativity. Love to All, Anna Out beyond ideas of wrong-doing and right-doing, there is a field. I'll meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about. Ideas, language, even the phrase 'each other' doesn't make any sense. --Rumi
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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

Stunning work!

DEAREST MONA, A FANTASTIC PIECE THAT SPEAKS TO EVERYONE WHO HAS EVER LOST SOME ONE DEAR! AS FOR KAL, I THINK THEY WOULD BE SO HAPPY IF HE FELL DOWN A TOILET NEVER TO BE SEEN AGAIN.hOWEVER dARLING kAL IF ITS JUST FRIENDSHIP YOU LACK ,I KNOW WHERE YOU CAN FIND A STUFFED DOG!!!!! shirley harison
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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

my next poem

Jesus feel my Balls! Or "Il Stronzo" dedicated right at Angry Kal! why not take your anger and shuv it up your trumpet! shirley harison
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Sigh. I’m taking a much

Sigh. I'm taking a much needed vacation from Neo, along with Kal. Theo, what can I say except that you're never a prophet in your own land. He gave a huge example of how we create realities in our minds. And no one is paying attention, most are too busy shooting the messenger, sadly. Bye bye. ~Anna Out beyond ideas of wrong-doing and right-doing, there is a field. I'll meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about. Ideas, language, even the phrase 'each other' doesn't make any sense. --Rumi
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mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

Three

Hi Magics2, was a great write, heart felt. God brings us many things In life. and I'm glad he brought you to this site . well done John Mantiscepter
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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

Kal

Be a better person, but you have taken the step so i salute you for that, stop being angry and lets see some love in your poems too! dont hurt others its not the way, we are all here to support eachothers dreams so stop being mean!!!!!! Mona is a beatiful poet and i am very glad to know her. And stop acting like you have a dictionary up your arse you act like the owner of a Ferrari! shirley harison
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Mona

The poem is beautiful and full of love from a kind and sweet heart. But I am disgusted by the turn of events!!! Love, Cat
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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

well said

A poem so sensitive and full of love,does diserve only 5 stars! shirley harison
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panaella

16 years 1 month ago

Agree...a sensitive write

Mona, I took time out to specifically read this...You have a faith...all I know is that at times of my life, I have turned to my faith to stop me falling into the Abyss. I'm not going into the cruel deception that has been played on you...but I've found this quote just for you... ' So many gods, so many creeds/ so many paths that wind and wind, / While just the the art of being kind/ Is all the sad world needs.' (Ella Wheeler Wilcox) I think I'm going to have a break from Neo too..there are other poetry sites without the 'Kallousness' of this place. PAX Adieu...Ells x
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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

Mona I will always give 5 stars

I lost my brother, 1 year older than me and a poem like this is really real 25years old.I was 24 as i feel he is with me on my journey of life, i came to florence as i did not see a peaceful life in london without him!its funny how individual people can bring out the best and the worst in others i thank you for your fantastic insight for life.I wrote a poem of him and one day when i am ready i will share it.do not feel sad as i believe what is is meant,is justified, so i say to you, you brought my courage today and you brought me happiness, i will cherish this forever. shirley harrison
chumfin

chumfin

16 years 1 month ago

WHITE QUEEN , BE YOUR SELF.

DEAR MONA, WHEN YOU KNOW HOW TO DO GOOD TO ALL AND YOU FAIL NOT TO , THEN IT BECOMES A SIN, NEVER CHANGE WHO YOU ARE , THE GOOD WILL APPPRECIATE YOU AND THE BAD WILL NOT. ALWAYS BE YOUR SELF, FOCUSED AND NEVER GET DISTRACTED BY ANY ONES STUNTS. POETS ARE RESPONSIBLE PEOPLE THE SOCIETY LOOKS UP TO , NOT JESTERS WHO ARE NEVER TAKEN SERIOUSLY. YOU ARE APPRECIATED. BUT PLEASE BE MORE CAREFUL JUST LIKE ANNIE SAID EARLIER ON. CHUMFIN
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Yes and I am just me

Thank you Chum and yes I know of which you speak. I am not one to play trickery with anyone or anything. Been that way all my life. If some can not accept me for what I am then I am also okay with that as I am not out fo fix the world so to speak but help many and love much. All the grandstanding is not of me, I write how I feel and know it for real, We all do the best we can and in one's life if it is to belittle someone for their beliefs or lack of I just pray for them thats all. No grudges I behold as that is not in the beholders eyes. Have a great weekend and be careful in all your days. A proud soldier you are!! Love and Peace Ms Mona xoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived