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paul
paul
Apr 18, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A Fairytale

 Laying in green pastures Trumpets of angels welcoming him home  At the gate saint Peter Awaits to give him the tour Of the grandest palace  Queens dressed in the finest garments Kings living lavishly  Poor and richhappilycoexist  Gardens filledwith roses and orchids  Sun always shinning no needfor clouds  Children playingwithout a care in the nearby park  One would think such placeis a fairy tale        
— paul, Apr 18, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Damn, you’re

Damn, you're good! ;-) ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles
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poewriter58

16 years 1 month ago

Paul

This poem has a very soothing effect but and you know with me there is always a but. I expected more in the way of you other writings, perhaps more of you in the work. As it stands it is very pretty but it doesn't have that Paul touch to it , as anyone can pen these words. well you asked didn't you lol Be well Chrys