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raj

Yes, You Are The One!!

Yes, you are the one
the epitome of my sanguine thoughts
I paint you in piquant colors,
in shades of crazy pink and  moody grass
for effect, a stroke of crimson red
a droplet of dew  for a tear shed
a pause, before I take one more look
at those beautiful imperfect creations
which make you just mine
Yes, you are the one
who drives me crazy
all the time...
 

You are the one
to whom I bare my heart
like a cobbler from dead hide
I craft together from shreds
a pair of right and left
may be imperfect to the naked eye
yet perfect, for in those feet i see
true imperfections of life
Yes, you are the one
on whose feet I walk
I dream, I dance, I glide, I fall
and let my moods take flight...
 

Yes, you are my succor
my mate on a lonely night
on your wings I perceive
rare colors and shades of life
on your feet I discover
its imperfections, shallow or deep
Yes, you are the one
who stays with me
through thick, thin and catharsis
one I can say without trepidation
my poetry, my dance, my song
the way it happens to me...
 
...raj (sublime_ocean)...

— raj, Apr 18, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Superb

I love it. Well written and a beautiful write. Rosina xena465
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Hello

Beautiful and enchanting poem on your feelings. I took one star off because of the lower case "i" when referring to yourself, it should be capitalized. Otherwise the piece is flawless. Always, Cat
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raj

16 years 1 month ago

Nice of you to

Nice of you to appreciate...you are right about the lower case....i stand corrected..actually i copied it from my notepad where i had jotted it down...raj...
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Hello

I give you back your star! Beautiful work. Always, Cat