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Yes, You Are The One!!
Yes, you are the one
the epitome of my sanguine thoughts
I paint you in piquant colors,
in shades of crazy pink and moody grass
for effect, a stroke of crimson red
a droplet of dew for a tear shed
a pause, before I take one more look
at those beautiful imperfect creations
which make you just mine
Yes, you are the one
who drives me crazy
all the time...
You are the one
to whom I bare my heart
like a cobbler from dead hide
I craft together from shreds
a pair of right and left
may be imperfect to the naked eye
yet perfect, for in those feet i see
true imperfections of life
Yes, you are the one
on whose feet I walk
I dream, I dance, I glide, I fall
and let my moods take flight...
Yes, you are my succor
my mate on a lonely night
on your wings I perceive
rare colors and shades of life
on your feet I discover
its imperfections, shallow or deep
Yes, you are the one
who stays with me
through thick, thin and catharsis
one I can say without trepidation
my poetry, my dance, my song
the way it happens to me...
...raj (sublime_ocean)...
Critiques
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Superb
raj
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Rosina..feels good
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Hello
raj
16 years 1 month ago
Nice of you to
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Hello
raj
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you Cat….