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Apr 18, 2010
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elysian fields
We would know within eight minutes
if the sun died.
I was in elysian fields
composing poetry,
singing, dancing,
tending to my chariots.
Earth made a whole rotation
before I knew the son’s light had gone out.
My world shattered as a prism explodes white light
into a kaleidoscope of confusion.
Kafka’s cockroach metamorphosed into
firstly Carroll’s rabbit, and then the manxome foe.
The canvas stretches and twists – did you know that?
So for the time mirrors were cracking and absurdity reigned
I stood by the Tumtum tree and listened to the Jabberwok burble.
— judyanne, Apr 18, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
This is my new favourite of
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
thank you anna
Kailashana
16 years 3 months ago
I love you more.
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
my dad's
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
I feel exactly the same as
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
i hoped you might feel this one jc
panaella
16 years 3 months ago
Elysian fields
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
hi ellie
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Lovely Judy
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
hi rosina
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
hey bud !!!
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
Lovely again here Jane lol
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
mona magic !!!
pamela
16 years 3 months ago
Dear J., It has pretty
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
thanks P
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