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elysian fields

 

 

 

We would know within eight minutes

if the sun died.

 

I was in elysian fields

composing poetry,

singing, dancing,

tending to my chariots.

Earth made a whole rotation

before I knew the son’s light had gone out.

 

My world shattered as a prism explodes white light

into a kaleidoscope of confusion.

Kafka’s cockroach metamorphosed into

firstly Carroll’s rabbit, and then the manxome foe.

The canvas stretches and twists – did you know that?

 

So for the time mirrors were cracking and absurdity reigned

I stood by the Tumtum tree and listened to the Jabberwok burble.

 

 

— judyanne, Apr 18, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

This is my new favourite of

This is my new favourite of yours, Judd! Bookmarked. ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

I love you more.

I love you more. ;-) ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

I feel exactly the same as

I feel exactly the same as Anna .. I have a thing for elysian fields ... In a book I have here somewhere its all based there ... beautifully written and I thought its one of your best so far love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
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panaella

16 years 1 month ago

Elysian fields

Hi Judy, Wonderful...and elysian fields are where we all want to go... Ells x
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Lovely Judy

I agree. Wonderful write. Rosina xena465
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

hi rosina

thanks hun i'm loving the stuff your spitting out at the moment. xx lol judy
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Lovely again here Jane lol

Imagery spectacular... really nice one here my friend that I did enjoy at this moment in time. Love Mona xoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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pamela

16 years 1 month ago

Dear J., It has pretty

Dear J., It has pretty much all been said. I loved this one very much. It seemed bittersweet to me. Lovely write!! P.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

thanks P

yes bitter-sweet with a leaning toward the former i'd say love j