When I accept my grey

Bravo ... fucking awesome write ... take a bow darlin ... you just lifted your writing to a whole other level ... imho love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

everything that never was.... beauty, Seahbac, extraordinary beauty of a poem! ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles

Unwrapping the me you broke...amazingly powerful line. Lovely. Ells x

Or better yet to open it up and let it all out. I once wrote of the black box in me and this kind of reminded me of it. I can shake it but there is silence still I felt that one too,here is a good piece of work. I like it Love Mona xoxxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived

I like how when separate they become silent. I too have put my broken in a box... thanks for expressing so how I feel...

late night music Magneta Lane Violet Constellation her voice how many bars did I ghost looking for her finding so many versions drinking Coca Cola smoking and dancing as it went thenight slipping in her river of torrent the rain leaking on the pool table the disc players the hued hubris layers Your poem has caught me in its light its feeling I am in awe this sadness opened me and nights light crept in and sat like a cat Im not alone!! thank you

Great write Seab, I will never go quietly into the gray, JK. Seems like the formatt could use a little attention, but word is the culprit. It was an inpired write. Great read. Julie D.D.

Brilliant thoughful write Seabhac...I think it's just great the way it is. Rosina xena465

I noticed in your comment to Julie you asked about format ... I did a small edit ...if you dont like it ignore it if you do well even better I placed you In a box marked broken, The shards cannot cut me now slivers beneath my skin causing festering postulation are avoided I can shake it But there is silence, still Each piece cocooned in wool safe in their distancing from one another Maybe some day when I accept my grey I will unwrap the me you broke and piece it with the boxed you The glued mending resembling in silhouette what our coupling could have been only then can I mourn for you love and big hugs JayCee uote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

You have outdone yourself this time! Have well,we who have "BEEN THERE" and are still unresolved with "THAT" can relate to this! These are my favourite lines: "I will unwrap the me you broke And piece it with the boxed you The glued mending Resembling in silhouette What our coupling could have been" Cheers Boni

This is an amazing poem. It's beautiful Good Job Danielle.

just reading those two first lines pulled me right in- i identify so much with this poem. what a great write! i hope one day we will all be able to accept our grey. m

your poem stayed with me- and finally i figured out why! i went searching through some older stuff and found something i wrote when i was 19 (something with a similar title and and how i wasn't ready to accept my gray!) Shades of Gray When the shades of gray disappear, I’m the only one left here. To breath, to heal, to live When all those precious moments haunt me, Those tender emotions are all I see. To hold, to feel, to live When there is nothing left to say, my heart will confide The lies we tell ourselves to survive. To love, to hate, to live When my callousness finally shines through, My soul will betray what’s left, the everlasting tattoo. To feel To die To live -m

Nice to see your new pic and you smiling, Great poem of yours and I think I may have commented allready. Keep up the great writes. Love Mona xoox TIME well spent is TIME well lived

enjoyed your paintings I see in the background of your nice pic. Are you an artist too, if so they are beautiful what I can make out of them. Will be visiting you often and thanks for welcoming me back to Neoland Love Mona xoox TIME well spent is TIME well lived