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Twas Just A Dream

Twas Just A Dream

Last nite I dreamt

I was in your arms,

Each one of you with me

Had a dance

Some did advance,

Some did romance,

But I loved with each one

Only the dance

Then the night fell,

The curtains too,

Now guess who was with me

Which one of you?

Well even I don’t

Remember that too,

How I wish I knew.

The dream broke me into pieces

I was up in flames

And then the dance

Was only in name…

— loved, Apr 18, 2010

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Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Loved

I liked the dance of words ... I am going to offer no suggestion but keep writing I can see you have improved on a few different fronts kind regards love Jayne-Chloe Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

HOLD UP … sorry I do have

HOLD UP ... sorry I do have one suggestion at the beginning of the poem you repeat ...last night I dreamt twice ... I would get rid of one of them I believe it would give more power to the poem ;) lol JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

A thousand arms,

A thousand arms, dancing.... Last nite I dreamt I was in your arms, Each one of you with me Had a dance But I loved with each one The night of curtains fell The dream broke me into pieces I was up in flames And then the dance Was only in name… A suggestion only... ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

shall reserve it for the next imaginary dream thanks ‘’This lovely girl smiles my way, She takes my heart miles away. Then how can I ever go astray She smiles at me all day’’ LOVED HOWZ THAT?????

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

dance loved

you dance through this poem shame you can't remember who you ended up with love judy

loved

16 years 1 month ago

yeah shame too

in dreams we can't be choosers can we???

loved

16 years 1 month ago

next time i will and

in the middle of the night i shall awake and remember this .... ‘’This lovely girl smiles my way, She takes my heart miles away. Then how can I ever go astray She smiles at me all day’’ loved .....