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seabhac
seabhac
Apr 17, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Magnolian Man

  You were courteous and politeIn an off white wayHolding my chairFor me to sitNo sexual body languageNot one tiny bitCream breast of chickenServed on crisp white plateConversation beigeSafe job, safe life, safe… An illusion of your ignorance My foot tapped in irritationI wanted racey redI desired topazI screamed scarletAnd you?You were MagnoliaOur first and our last date
— seabhac, Apr 17, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

I hear strains of another in

I hear strains of another in this poem , poet that is ... beautifully written Liz I think this is another new favourite lol love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x (Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll)
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 1 month ago

Hi Jayne

This one was written for an abridged edition on the theme magnolia, posted it here to get some crit before submitting it. Missed you guys , it'll take a bit of doing to catch up with poems I have missed. Like your quote above by Robert Green. Flying high Seabhac
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Sebhac

Sounds like mediocrity man to me. I can see why it was the last date. There is so much more to life than beige and shades there of. Always, Cat
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Read what spiral dynamics

Read what spiral dynamics says about *beige*...U2...http://www.spiraldynamics.org/Graves/colors.htm I was lucky I met and loved a rainbow. ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 1 month ago

Good link

I enjoyed the read and the information. I dream in colour but caught my literal eye on the website link that all the tabs are grave shaped...graphic artist with a sense of humour. glad you are leaving the leprechauns alone as you've already found your pot of gold.. Seabhac