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loved
loved
Apr 16, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Appreciation ;[Revised

Appreciation

If my words
Can raise your level,
I’m quite sure
Twill be
An eye-opener for others.

You are a greater person

As I can see ,
Who always praises
When one deserves it

We have lots of jealousy to face
In our short lives
What say of husbands?
What of wives?

It’s only after all
That hope alone
In the form of love

]only does survive.

— loved, Apr 16, 2010

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 1 month ago

you say of yourself

"A POET BY BIRTH WITH A MILLION NAMES LATEST IS LOVED LOVED BY ALL" You don't listen to crit, you don't edit, you leave spelling and grammar unattended. So I offer no crit. Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

spell check

varies according to comp settings and now heres its Canadian my regrets
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Loved

If my words Can raise your level, I’m quite sure Twill be An eye-opener for others. You are a greater person As I can see , Who always praises When one deserves it We have lots of jealousy to face In our short lives What say of husbands? What of wives? It’s only after all That hope alone In the form of love [that]only does survive. I have done a small edit on format to show you how it could look in my humble opinion it looks much better like this ... and you had a spelling error in your last line ... kind regards love JayCee (Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll)
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

I have learnt That the only way To uplift a soul, No matter how disgusting One may be Is by praising it… Perhaps it may result As a last light Of the flickering flame That that one may still see, The light of day As one passes away ‘’I do not yet consider myself Worthy enough to comment On Ur love poetry And hope to see some of Ur comments On many of my worthless entry..... this one was one of them thanks loved
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

It reads just fine

It reads just fine Loved. Rosina xena465