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Apr 16, 2010
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The Disease of Heart Ache
She has driven
the rusty nail
of heart ache
into my body
Its disease spreading
through my veins
numbing my soul
My heart starting
to crack in half
A feeling as if
I will never
find the cure
I am in
a comma
never coming out of it
the rusty nail
of heart ache
into my body
Its disease spreading
through my veins
numbing my soul
My heart starting
to crack in half
A feeling as if
I will never
find the cure
I am in
a comma
never coming out of it
— Benjamin1987, Apr 16, 2010
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Ravenshakti
16 years 1 month ago
Hello Benjamin...