In The Beginning

Hi Judyanne, Right up my alley, love pondering this creative process the nothingness from which all emerges. I am new to neopoets and easing my way so wanted to say I like what I read and I want more. Does the poetic process mirror the creation story? are we seeking to describe some of those perfect moments in slices? cheers manawa

I like that stanza too... No longer part of paradise but frozen forever somewhere are some perfect moments in slices... Super. Rosina xena465

Ann of Norway Yes I do I do, you leave me floating in the ether of non existence, like a feather that once was part of a bird, is it still alive as a feather no and yet absurdly it exists, life all life is a paradox, it is and yet what IS we shall never know more than the brain knows of itself and as that involves the brain itself trying to find out what itself is......well...... "Darkness was on the face of the deep.".........the 'was' implies knowledge of it...slightly Biblical when this is outside all theories otherwise. "And with It was the Word." ..........as is this bit too! Just me loving your thoughts judyanne we love paradox, our brains love such don't they too? Love to you loveable you from annanya.

everything Ann said and so much more loved this surreal write of yours has a different feel from the rest of your work not a departure but a change in joureny love and hugs Jayne-Chloe (Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll)

The big bang did emerge From something… So I’m not quite sure yet That there was nothing Before anything…. Lovely emergence of some thing Your lovely poetry from nothing