Kailashana

Apr 15, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

what do you see?

what do you see?

I am wild.
A wild woman.
A wild woman flowing wildly
into a wild river of being.

I feel you near,
your wilderness meets mine,

we are wild together,
touch the wild blue sky
with our wild earth eyes,
like wild flowers
we open and close,

surrender the dusk of
swollen lips to the dawn of
hungry thighs into an ocean
that lives and dies into the wild.

Yellow.

Have you seen the wild sun
surf the wild meadow blazing
with dandelions singing their wild song?

— Kailashana, Apr 15, 2010

Critiques

shirley harrison

16 years 3 months ago

What do you see!

shirley harrison I see a beautiful Poem I see peace and harmony,You are a beautiful Poet Forgive me i am new and still working on the "how to do" this web site is fab!

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Awww….. you’re just a

Awww..... you're just a newbie here with stars in your eyes... wait till the firewor(d)s begin. You'll be bitch-slapped. (Hi Lou!) http://www.neopoet.com/node/37887 ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Not hardly, Indi… you do

Not hardly, Indi... you do know how bad that is for water, air, pets and folks' lungs? I'll just piss off my neighbors, thank you very much. Besides that's yellow, too. ;-) ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Hmmm. Rise would seem to

Hmmm. *Rise* would seem to work better for the weaker sex, eh? Poor guys have no control over their dumb stick, eh? ;-) "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Yes, I heard about that..

Yes, I heard about that.. though I WAS talking from an another vantage point, lots of men use that as their talking stick. Straw for brains. ;-) Love ya. ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles

lyz

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Kailashana

Yep, you are wild, lol. Racy, colorful, cheery and fun. I have to add, Dirty girl. HeHe. Hot, fast paced and I am glad the neighbors are jealous. A wonderful spicy yet clean write. Lots of smiles. XX

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Hehehe. Reminds me of a

Hehehe. Reminds me of a German commercial for cleanser Michael sent me. And that American commercial for a dirty mouth. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9TxVJAkwbqA Love ya, Anna "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles

lyz

16 years 3 months ago

Sticky McStink face, lol.

Gotta use that line. Great add, lol. Great poem too. Love Lyz. XX

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

The dandyloins, the softest seductive petals of those pungent..

Ann of Norway "Have you seen the wild sun surf the wild meadow blazing with dandelions singing their wild song?" Yes. We feel as if naked we are swooped over the dandyloins, the softest seductive petals of those pungent flowers enticing our wild desires with intoxicating sensations, setting the nerves of the skin in alert, and sinking into the yellow of them we are covered in their pollen. You envelop our sensitivities for love dearest sister Anna, and we are happy for you, blazing gamboge yellow happy for you. Ann.

lou

16 years 3 months ago

Hi

I enjoyed the poem, I hope you don't mind me suggesting that it would be even better, with fewer repeatitions of the word wild. lou

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Course not Lou, but you have

Course not Lou, but you have to know me--it's always been all or nothing. I did, however, consider it. ;-) ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

It wouldn't be this poem, the same poem without ALL the WILDS;

Ann of Norway It wouldn't be this poem, the same poem without ALL the WILDS; they give it the relentless ALL as Anna says, like the revolving of the hair of someone dancing love's dance and her hair swinging out coming round again and again and again. emphasising the sensation of wildness. Ist not so Anna sister mine? Ann with love again and again and again.

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dearest Mum

Sorry to be late getting here today had a crap day ... but I have to say it wouldnt be your poem without all the wild in it ... ;) loved your poem but then I always do smiles love and biggest hugs JayCee x x x x x (Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll)

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

It’s going to be a crap

It's going to be a crap day for me. Barry will be leaving today. I'm trying not to be too sad. He was going to stay a week and we watched Spring unfold for almost a month. Hope your evening will be better, write me, love your new quote. Common sense is a commodity for which we pay dearly until it is the only education of worth. hugs, Mum "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

I am just going to have a

I am just going to have a shower and finish a poem and I will email you before bed ... its 1am here I only bee out of bed a couple of hours I am feeling pretty yuck at the moment but I will survive ... talk to you in a couple of hours (((hugs))) you and B are going to miss each other ... try not to think about him leaving think about seeing him again ;) ...glad you liked my quote with all the silliness round here lately I thought it was Apt lol love you JayCee x x x (Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll)

Candlewitch

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Anna

What a wild poem ;) Always, Cat

Orphani

16 years 3 months ago

the wild woman is sleeping,

the wild woman is sleeping, as outside the rain is still and peaceful in her dreams; the yellow flowers where we met, and loved such miracles between us-I can always find her there, and hold her close-life's most beautiful flower.

loved

16 years 3 months ago

this wilderness

1. In this wilderness I reside I am now wild So is the world with me… They can't see That I can't Neither hear nor see So why do they then behave Extremely wildly with me 2. We poets, each one of us is unique… I have no ability to comment Nor correct as any comma and full stop change Will the poet’s originality derange? But appreciate we must still So the poet is ready for his excellent next kill. Gr8888888888 poetry

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