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merging raindrops

you have blended all colors
into the radiance of fire
pure and naked inside each other
there is no separation
in the merging raindrops
or unweaving of the flax tapestries
with the playful kisses of the sun

it is written about this
in the ink of our blood
where the pages are pressed and held
to the end of all seasons
— Orphani, Apr 15, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear B

Deepest Sigh lucky woman love and big hugs JC (http://www.neopoet.com/forum/36627-meet-n-greet-live-chat-thurs-apr-15th-9-11-pm-ny-est-host-poewriter58-welcome-new-member#comment-175177) ... Be there ~!~!~!
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lyz

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Barry

I can hear the heartbeat within these raindrops merging. A fiery rainbow was my first thought upon reading. Your poetry has excelled to a higher place and enjoying it I am. Well written dear man. XX
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 1 month ago

The pact, the marriage of mankind:-

Ann of Norway In the meadows of natures womb you blaze your fire, all Spring and Summers flowers adorn the day and as the clouds of joyful mackerel swim the skies in rainbow stripes the drops of blood are pressed between the incisions of the hands, you are now one in the brotherhood of man. So subtle your allusions, so fine your metaphors, so deep your love, dear brother Barry. Ann. I had visited Anna's dandelions just before, perhaps that influenced my use of meadows here! You wild things, I love wild flowers. As I love you both.