Arid Heart

Dear lady you describe exactly how I feel sometimes, overloaded with bad news great poem and bloody well written love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x (http://www.neopoet.com/forum/36627-meet-n-greet-live-chat-thurs-apr-15th-9-11-pm-ny-est-host-poewriter58-welcome-new-member#comment-175177) ... Be there ~!~!~!

This poem is very morbid.. but well written indeed!! words from the darkest place of your heart ey? xx

Wanting to feel again, well my dear one, this is written with feeling and yes this world can suck us dry. So much to deal with and where to start. You have expressed a feeling felt by many I assume, as I have felt as well. I send you a smile and a great big hug. May not be much but, you deserve it. I see your heart amidst these words, I also understand. Love Lyz. XX

I feel your defeat and despair. You'll be fine Cat. You're a good woman and will find your way back. Rosina xena465

cat i am hoping this is just a theme and not to personal , "my heart has hit the point of saturation" , what a great stong expresive line , well said ,,,zigs x

i stopped watching the news long ago quite happily keep my head in the sand it beats the pain in the heart and the wasted tears over somethings over which i have no control. excellent write as usual cat hold up, your uncle's not far away xxx love judy

Cat, we feel with our poetry, don't we? _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

you were writing about me candlewitch...right? how topical the poem is, a feeling of despair, at our government our society, our law ! Keep hoping things will change a well written poem, flows well and good meaning well done

but i thought that i had uplifted ur thought rise and the world willrise with u sit and twill pass by ............. LOVED

Cat, I have been wading through the mass of poems I have missed recently and found this one lingering in the corner. This is full of emotion and the image it paints in my mind is one of despair. The image that is clear in my mind is one of you trapped in a ball of bubblewrap, you are there but not being able to get a grip or truly feel anything due to the barrier of air filled plastic. Fav line: My heart has hit the point of saturation this sponge is full. 5 stars for sure, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

within so shines brightly (and keeps on shinin'). I especially like My heart has hit the point of saturation this sponge is full; not another drop can it hold. Thanx, Chuck

commented earlier than this on your profile pic. Love that kitty's face, you know, the one who, it's obvious, feels safe, secure, loved. Thanx again, Chuck