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mantiscepter
Apr 14, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

He Wrote

 He blew the lining
out of the silver sky
as he wrote
with his ivory pen

thinking about it 
later to cry
as something he
could never mend
— mantiscepter, Apr 14, 2010

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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Oh how true it is

You know I love a mantis that does a prantis :) yourself and your poetry Good job my mantis!! LOve, Magics02 TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

He Wrote

I thank you very much for your reading of this poem, some terms and expressions of free thought are sometimes challenged, and I, being very fond of what I call. off the wall poems. and I know to Me they make perfect sense and to others something completely different, and others don't understand whatsoever, still I write and give a warm thanks to those who do like them. many thanks Magics02. and I'll send the Love back your way. John. Mantiscepter
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear John

I think this is wonderful short but packed with so much meaning ... lovely write my friend love and hugs Jayne-Chloe (http://www.neopoet.com/forum/36627-meet-n-greet-live-chat-thurs-apr-15th-9-11-pm-ny-est-host-poewriter58-welcome-new-member#comment-175177) ... Be there ~!~!~!
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mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

I Wrote

Hello seren, I see your all over the site into many things. which is cool. I was sitting the grand baby today and I thought of you and Liz. This was the one born six months ago[ Aidan ] Cute little scruffer and stubborn, So we had a fun day of it, anyway thanks for taking time to review this poem , many thanks. Love and Hugs John