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Heroes

It’s sad that children grow and mature for when they’re very small

they think their parents heroes who can do no wrong at all.

 

There is a time I can recall when my little ones humbled me

with their innocent and confident trust in me their dear Mummy.

 

We’d had plush new carpets laid and the doors were all too long.

They kept sticking on the shag pile and were hard to close or open.

 

The boys were in their bedroom and realised they couldn’t get out.

They panicked and started calling for me obviously beginning to doubt

 

that they would ever leave again – to be stuck there evermore

if Mother couldn’t help them and open their boudoir door.

 

"Stand back a way," I shouted loud, then building up a steam

I gave the wood a five high kick that would've turned Jackie Chan dark green.

 

And as I forced the culprit open I looked downwards to see

four big blue saucers gazing up at me.

 

Then still wide-eyed they turned to each other and said in unison

with voices soft and filled with awe, “Just like Wonder Woman!”

— judyanne, Apr 14, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Nice one Judy

Playful and true about the simplicity of children's way of thinking/panicking. I once lay a carpet by myself and thought I did great, until I couldn't open the front door...carpet being too thick...never thought of that when I bought it. I should've left it to the carpet-fitter, but couldn't afford the £100 extra! Rosina xena465
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

hi rosina

thanks... i've heard a few people who've been caught out on that very thing so we're not alone i think. lol judy
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

you just reminded me of a

you just reminded me of a day I thought my daughter Bethany had locked herself in her fathers shed lol I broke a window to get in only to find she was under the steps where we kept the wood for the fire lol she was so disraught she was 2 shes nearly 17 now lol wonderful poem dear lady love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x (http://www.neopoet.com/forum/36627-meet-n-greet-live-chat-thurs-apr-15th-9-11-pm-ny-est-host-poewriter58-welcome-new-member#comment-175177) ... Be there ~!~!~!
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

No hun not hiding she was

No hun not hiding she was locked under the steps there was a door on the woodroom to keep the kids out of there but someone left it open, she was found but has never liked the dark much since that love Jayne-Chloe (http://www.neopoet.com/forum/36627-meet-n-greet-live-chat-thurs-apr-15th-9-11-pm-ny-est-host-poewriter58-welcome-new-member#comment-175177) ... Be there ~!~!~!
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Judy

I will never know the wonder of having my own children. Thanks for sharing this story with us. Always, Cat
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 1 month ago

You hero judyanne

Ann of Norway Yes we think them so great, so knowledgeable, until we grow up and find they are just like us and that no one can know it all. Just sometimes the reverse can be true, when the children puzzle something out for themselves, to the adults surprise and then they re the heroes. I did enjoy your tale and the ending was so fine, there was one verse that I stumbled a tiny bit, the rhythm doesn't quite gel for me :- "Calling to them through the keyhole to stand back a little way I gave the wood a kick with a pretty good karate parody." You are a particular poet and have such consistency of thought that's nice for you, I am not sure why, but I like it when reading your poetry.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

dear annanya, thank you

yes i was struggling with those lines. i have changed them totally - i think it's better, but a bit of a tongue twister now i think. love to you judyanne
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 1 month ago

You scream judyanne!!!!!!!!

Ann of Norway You scream judyanne, nobody can say you don't have a sense of humour, spliffing, now I can vote if I have to. and you can be patted on the back , wow you are agile, or were was the point, flying through the air like an acrobatic Women's institute member of Devonshire, I can see you, yes I can, were you good at sports then? I was a fencer and nearly joined the Olympic team coach one time so watch it all of you I can wield a sword!!!! A pathetic one sh!!! A foil. Love to you Ann.