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Heroes
It’s sad that children grow and mature for when they’re very small
they think their parents heroes who can do no wrong at all.
There is a time I can recall when my little ones humbled me
with their innocent and confident trust in me their dear Mummy.
We’d had plush new carpets laid and the doors were all too long.
They kept sticking on the shag pile and were hard to close or open.
The boys were in their bedroom and realised they couldn’t get out.
They panicked and started calling for me obviously beginning to doubt
that they would ever leave again – to be stuck there evermore
if Mother couldn’t help them and open their boudoir door.
"Stand back a way," I shouted loud, then building up a steam
I gave the wood a five high kick that would've turned Jackie Chan dark green.
And as I forced the culprit open I looked downwards to see
four big blue saucers gazing up at me.
Then still wide-eyed they turned to each other and said in unison
with voices soft and filled with awe, “Just like Wonder Woman!”
Critiques
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Nice one Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hi rosina
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
you just reminded me of a
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
was she hiding from you?
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
No hun not hiding she was
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
you're no worse than my ex theo
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thank you cat
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
You hero judyanne
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
dear annanya, thank you
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
You scream judyanne!!!!!!!!