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Sand-grain in the Snow

You're the shadow that clings on to me,
Like a little girl does a bow.
You're a new friend's reflection
In an old and shattered window.
You're the gunshot during the slience.
You're the thunderstorm in Spring.
You're the accidental shape caught
Right in the back of the drawing.
You're the misinterpreted line,
That devestates the entire show.
You're the rasberry in the strawberry pot,
The sand-grain in the snow.
— evie.haywood, Apr 14, 2010

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poewriter58

16 years 1 month ago

Evie

lines three and four wonderful wording very descriptive Evie may I suggest leaving the on in the first line off ( no pun intended) I take that back all of your lines are beautiful. Excellent work your title is just awsome that drew me right in love this work Chrys