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Apr 14, 2010
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just around the corner
paradise is
where you can only be
and nothing more is,
surrounded
by love,
brief moments of lucidity
shimmering peace of mind
as when you suddenly put
your hand
against a little hares fur chest
and in amazement feels
its trembling heartbeat
while
a squirrel is sitting on a warm stone
and enjoying the sun
which slowly goes down
yes
it feels like it is
just around the corner
it may appear
the next time you lift the handset when it rings
or when you wake up 04:33 and should
not go to work
to get to know a passionate
joy
to be just the person
I was born to be
and
perhaps the most important of all
the warm cup of coffee after lunch
to enjoy
the path
has no clear end
and
hope is perhaps all it gives
— odd molly, Apr 14, 2010
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Critiques
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Beautiful writing Molly
odd molly
16 years 1 month ago
Thank You so much Rosina for
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Sometimes in the complexity
odd molly
16 years 1 month ago
Thank You Anna. yes.. So
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
The touch of love.
odd molly
16 years 1 month ago
Tack så mycket kära Ann of
Carchuleto
16 years 1 month ago
:) great work
odd molly
16 years 1 month ago
Thank You dear C for your
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 1 month ago
The subtly put thought and love here is tremedous!
odd molly
16 years 1 month ago
Yes Dale.. Paradise it is if
Worldwide Freeride
16 years ago
Hi Molly!
magics02
16 years ago
Molly where are you gal