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A Love Story

                   
  
                A Love Story


There was a young boy like you
who loved a girl …
an old lady
and said…….
…… I love you

She replied son …..It’s a long time gone….. You can't have my love ….. Except as a son

Still he replied …. I love you

 

She closed her eyes and said

But I wish in another life

We shall do…….
then she passed away.

Let that experience not happen toooooooooooou

Is this the secret poem?
Lover boy
then come out in the open
love, not lust last forever
be there no lusty sex
but life,

In the individual sex

Hope the secret is replied
as in an open secret

Is this the hidden message????

Friend
then awake
for it’s not the beginning
but an ultimate end

 

 

 

 

 

— loved, Apr 13, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Very entertaining

Very entertaining Loved...good fun. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

u as well as some others stand by me some... have found me intolerable/REPULSIVE i was about to quit but i would miss people like u who llike me thanks so i decided to stay and comment..... not... they don't like it they all want praise. I thought only i was suffering from EGO CANCER glad i have company.... LOVED
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Good for you girl

We write what we want and be dammed...who cares eh? Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks again

since u hold my hand i shall take a stand and let those ones fly as fast as they can thanks friend ur gr888888888888 love ed