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Apr 13, 2010
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A Love Story
A Love Story
There was a young boy like you
who loved a girl …
an old lady
and said…….
…… I love you
She replied son …..It’s a long time gone….. You can't have my love ….. Except as a son
Still he replied …. I love you
She closed her eyes and said
But I wish in another life
We shall do…….
then she passed away.
Let that experience not happen toooooooooooou
Is this the secret poem?
Lover boy
then come out in the open
love, not lust last forever
be there no lusty sex
but life,
In the individual sex
Hope the secret is replied
as in an open secret
Is this the hidden message????
Friend
then awake
for it’s not the beginning
but an ultimate end
— loved, Apr 13, 2010
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xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Very entertaining
loved
16 years 1 month ago
thanks
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Good for you girl
loved
16 years 1 month ago
thanks again