weirdelf

Apr 13, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Life is gorgeous

I quiver alive

like a cat

a big one

at every opportunity

of life

knowledge or

more.

Sometimes I sit back on my haunches and lick my wounds

even sleep for an aeon or two

makes not much diff

there's still spliff

and women

and delirium of sorts

and always more

endless fun with teasing

religious mice

scurrying into their texts,

(some of which I wrote,

from pure malice)

there will always be me

or another pooka

to lead you astray

or you could go your own way

— weirdelf, Apr 13, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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Critiques

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Irreverant to the last dear

Irreverant to the last dear man ... "religious" mice needs an eye lol love and big hugs JayCee x x x (http://www.neopoet.com/forum/36627-meet-n-greet-live-chat-thurs-apr-15th-9-11-pm-ny-est-host-poewriter58-welcome-new-member#comment-175177) ... Be there ~!~!~!

weirdelf

16 years 1 month ago

to the last!?!?! eeek is the god squad gonna do me in?

no worries, but, got a big pile of half-bricks, Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

LMFAO I just noticed your

LMFAO I just noticed your message .... huni I meant to say you WILL be irreverant to the last sorry my bad love and many giggles Jayne-Chloe x x x (http://www.neopoet.com/forum/36627-meet-n-greet-live-chat-thurs-apr-15th-9-11-pm-ny-est-host-poewriter58-welcome-new-member#comment-175177) ... Be there ~!~!~!

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

hey jess

leave it - i doubt it was a typo - a freudian slip perhaps - or are you really that clever? one-eyed. love it all love judy

weirdelf

16 years 1 month ago

not sure what you mean

if it is pooka, instead of kooka, then it was certainly intentional, no slip there. Dubhain, one of my alter egos is a pooka. Seems I might be a bit clever. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

religous - as jc says your religious mice need an eye

and anna comments with better spelling below lol judy

weirdelf

16 years 1 month ago

not so clever after all

Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Religulous. Everyone should

Religulous. Everyone should see it. However, imo, he hasn't even begun... (neither Jess nor Maher) Entire movie: http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-3791007322683758535# (Hurry before the gods of video deem to remove it!) ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles

Jonathan Moore

16 years 1 month ago

I normally don't participate in thread hijacking

But I just watched the movie the other day - it was great. --Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Jess-Elf

there will always be me or another pooka to lead you astray I can only hope so! Always, Cat

panaella

16 years 1 month ago

religious mice scurrying...

Love that line elfy... Ells x

DawningDaytripper

16 years 1 month ago

Don’t you feel the

Don't you feel the ironicness in the line you wrote, "some of which I write from pure malice" it may apply here Jess. Never known a religous mouse, and your implications aren't so sly. As you have already noticed. After just reading, "perfect crime" your moral balance is not impressing me. Witty, sarcastic, self amusing. Proper grammer and spelling. But not balanced. Now, Mr Weirdelf Jess what THIS IS NOT ABOUT "Calamine". Remember? So what do you have to say for yourself? I'm waiting. Make a poetry challenge then stand me up! Julie D.D. Mine is posted. 2 infact.

weirdelf

16 years 1 month ago

calamine totally slipped from my mind

some family issues came up I had to deal with, I think we've talked about them. You win, doubly! Both clever, well written and stand in their own right. You probably would have won anyway. About this one, yeah, it's not so great, slipped out in a moment, but "Perfect Crime" is one of my favourites Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible

DawningDaytripper

16 years 1 month ago

There both have thier merits

There both have thier merits Jess, and flaws. I overall can appreaciate them. Just sick of all the button pushing around here lately. It could have been a spirtual mouse ya know. Or savy, or even something along the lines of a martyr mouse. But with the word choice... just bait. I still expect a write about Calamine by the way. As issues permit that is. Julie D.D.

R.M.Shanmugam

16 years 1 month ago

expectantly nice. shan

IKnowNoBox

16 years 1 month ago

Vita est iam

Once a sheep I strayed returning to my hedonistic origins the anology of mice is very relative, certainly anyone with eyes open can see that self titled denominations are expirementing with their marks Err flock/ congregation, to see just how thouroughly they can be fleeced.

weirdelf

16 years 1 month ago