Intimate audition

Whisper...whisper...pant ...pant...

whisper to me - if only with your sighs!!! Loved it - short and sweet! Boni

Wish someone would whisper in my ear and make me feel like that! Just got my wee pet rat Zak in my ear sometimes, not whispering though, nibbling...hope that doesn't spoil your moment at the thought of a rat in your ear Nina...Love it. Rosina xena465

want to betrayed me, my cheating heart, love the write

Firstly, this is a good piece and flows well. The reading flow is smoother than than speaking flow and I would like to address that by offering a more intimate word in a couple of places and adding a line to expand the mood. Suggestions are [bracketed] ---------------------------- You [needn't] read novels to me nor [recite rapturous] poems when you whisper in my ear it’s not the words that matter it’s your breath that sweet tingling caress resounds in my cochlea [and I quiver] we are here we are alive we are real ------------------------------------- --Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)

Who wouldn't want to whisper in your ear after that Nina, grandly simple and inviting. Whisper whisper, Your talent to catch me and hold my attentions are astonding. You know all the boys will want to resound in your choclea. LOL. I almost wanted a little nibble of a lobe though, but I am only the student and learning from the teacher. I Loved it. Julie D.D.

This is brilliant ... the soft touch of the title draws a mood straight away ... [intimate] silences the mind to be told something extraordinary I am running out of superlatives hun fucking brilliant will have to do love and hugs JayCee x x x

Enjoyed it. A short poem with an indepth meaning. 5 stars.

my vocal membranes sussurate.... Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible

Ann of Norway The music of one's breath that's so intimate and lovely Nina, and that suggestive word the cochlea which has the ring of the shell the conch shell in which we hear the whispers of the sea and far off places, setting the mood to that of contemplation with the lull of the waves wafting in our ears. When I read to Erik he goes to sleep at the sound of my voice, so its no good hoping for comprehension of the book. A poem in the NOW. Love to you dear Nina from Ann.

An audible sigh I leave for you, Nina, along with a nod to Jonathan's suggestion. ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles

* for the scent of passion in his breath* I loved what you wrote . Few words but said so much. love o molly

Wow!!!! Nina, You blessed my morning! What more can we expect from a poet? Love you for this!! Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~