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Apr 13, 2010
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Frustrated
For sure I am frustratedMost surely disgustedWe all have days like thisWhen all we do is hiss, hiss, hiss A snake will crawl all over the placeFor when it finds it's resting place
The hissing will ceaseFor soon comes the peace For sure I am frustratedQuite plainly disgustedFor life without loveIs not from above Get it out they sayThat's what writings aboutNow go in your chairAnd shout it out
For the day will comeWhen all is fineCome eat the bread
Let's drink some wine
Angered issues stresses oneselfBetter to yield, then scold yourselfThere lays piles of quicksand all aboutNow go do your best and shout it out.
MMS 4.13.10
The hissing will ceaseFor soon comes the peace For sure I am frustratedQuite plainly disgustedFor life without loveIs not from above Get it out they sayThat's what writings aboutNow go in your chairAnd shout it out
For the day will comeWhen all is fineCome eat the bread
Let's drink some wine
Angered issues stresses oneselfBetter to yield, then scold yourselfThere lays piles of quicksand all aboutNow go do your best and shout it out.
MMS 4.13.10
— magics02, Apr 13, 2010
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magics02
16 years 1 month ago
A note
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Mona
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Postal not me Indi
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Go Girl
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Rosalina
odd molly
16 years 1 month ago
Love to you.o molly
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Love to you too Molly
panaella
16 years 1 month ago
find your inner chi Mona
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Panella
panaella
16 years 1 month ago
Mona
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Panaella
Jonathan Moore
16 years 1 month ago
Chi Mona, not child
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Then stay off of my page
Jonathan Moore
16 years 1 month ago
This incident has been reported
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Incident ?? My comment to Panella ?? very good
Jonathan Moore
16 years 1 month ago
As Stated previously
panaella
16 years 1 month ago
I am not offended Mona
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
oops double post in error
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Violation of good taste
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Lovely
Jonathan Moore
16 years 1 month ago
Mona, you should review the Terms of Use
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
As You shall also
lou
16 years 1 month ago
I know
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Lou
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Hey Ephy
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
LOL
The Seeker
16 years 1 month ago
Awwww sweetie are you okay
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
THANK YOU FOR REMARKS ON THE POEM AND NOT THE POET
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Mona, I try to speak
magics02
16 years ago
You posted four times!!