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Sadness.

Sadness.Dewy tear drops on your cheek,
Barren loneliness that you seek.
A form of sadness weighs you down.
Bereavement clothes you like a gown.
A human frailness I do see,
On your visits, rare to me.
Have you lost that costly spark,
That guides we humans through the dark.
Must your sorrow so sadly clear,
Cling through to my unwilling ear.
For each one of us alone,
Has a wanting to atone.
A need of love forever lost,
An endless time of foreboding frost.
The coldness of that waiting grave,
Frantic efforts your way to pave.
To bring back to life, once more,
With love and tenderness, so very sure.
That you dear friend, may with me,
Go hand in hand through eternity.

© Bernard Shaw

— Bernard Shaw, Apr 12, 2010

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Hello

I found these lines to be particularly poignant: For each one of us alone, Has a wanting to atone. A need of love forever lost, An endless time of foreboding frost. The coldness of that waiting grave, Frantic efforts your way to pave. Yes most of us wants to have their life have meaning, and to leave a kindly mark upon the world. I liked this poem very much. Always, Cat
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Bernard Shaw

16 years 1 month ago

Cat

At first I thought that it might be a little too on the sad side to send, but theire is a hopeful streak to it bern.