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mantiscepter
Apr 12, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

PASSAGE

Sharp
with a brilliance
are thoughts in
time

flashes of reality 
from a distant realm
I find

spheres that
 have been forgotten
a part of before
a sign

 following my life itself
this road I walk
declined

— mantiscepter, Apr 12, 2010

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Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear John

this touches on the profound ... I loved this little poem of yours ... I am going to come back to this one again and again love and hugs Jayne-Chloe (http://www.neopoet.com/forum/36627-meet-n-greet-live-chat-thurs-apr-15th-9-11-pm-ny-est-host-poewriter58-welcome-new-member#comment-175177) ... Be there ~!~!~!
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mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

Passive/passage

HI j.c. Have been trying to get to you!! to say; job well done !!!. [on spotlight] I told you it was special.... so happy to see this happen to a person I believes is well deserving... sorry. one day I will be able to travel any where on this Damn site and get to it, on the spot. when I want to, makes sense to me. was great to hear from you. we will talk soon. Love John. I was so excited to hear from you, I forgot why you wrote.. I'm happy you liked this poem. and thankful for your precious time used to comment,and visit. your friend John.