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Apr 03, 2010
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my twin revolving heart
My darling, I fell
sleeping on the couch
as you went walking,
while motorcycles were weaving
spring sunshine
down smiling Stockholm streets.
Would I not smile
were I not beneath
your treading feet ?
would I not feel
eternity,
between the pleasures
of your footfalls
softly falling ?
As automobiles glide
along these cobbled causeways,
our planets wheel above
as should I,
always turn
to you,
my twin revolving heart.
sleeping on the couch
as you went walking,
while motorcycles were weaving
spring sunshine
down smiling Stockholm streets.
Would I not smile
were I not beneath
your treading feet ?
would I not feel
eternity,
between the pleasures
of your footfalls
softly falling ?
As automobiles glide
along these cobbled causeways,
our planets wheel above
as should I,
always turn
to you,
my twin revolving heart.
Comments
Alice Ember
16 years 1 month ago
Awsome
Craig Norris
16 years 1 month ago
Hey Alice
Draki
16 years 1 month ago
Grabbed my interest. :)
Craig Norris
16 years 1 month ago
thanks Draki
odd molly
16 years 1 month ago
‘and it turnsas a