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my twin revolving heart

My darling, I fell
sleeping on the couch
as you went walking,
while motorcycles were weaving
spring sunshine
down smiling Stockholm streets.

Would I not smile
were I not beneath
your treading feet ?
would I not feel
eternity,
between the pleasures
of your footfalls
softly falling ?

As automobiles glide
along these cobbled causeways,
our planets wheel above
as  should I,
always turn
to you,
my twin revolving heart.

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Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 1 month ago

Awsome

Great write. Loved it. Love, Alice Carrying your own battle scars is a sign of your own strength. Carrying others battle scars is a sign of your very soul.
C

Craig Norris

16 years 1 month ago

Hey Alice

thanks for the comments, love it that you enjoyed this. cheers Craig.
O

odd molly

16 years 1 month ago

‘and it turnsas a

'and it turns as a thousand suns weaving us as threads of gold' love and love your poem. love. o molly