WHERE YOU BELONG

I need to see your smile

every single day

so I hope times goes fast

while you are away.

Our lives are heaven sent

for us to share

and life is much better

when you are there.

So rest a while, sweet dreams

it won’t be too long

until you’re back in my arms

where you belong.

— Timbo, Apr 12, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: GBR

Favorite Poets: Rather than poets I tend to be influenced by songwriters and have a love of lyrics.

Critiques

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

i love this timbo

it can be read as a small parting - and 'til we meet tomorrow won't be long or it can be read, as i have because of the words 'So rest a while, sweet dreams', as the other's death - which makes it really, really sad and loving. love judy

Tim

16 years 1 month ago

thanks judy, she had just

thanks judy, she had just gone into hospital for an operation, but is home again now, nothing to worry about. Always interesting to hear other peoples interpretation of your poems and see how it works, Take care, Tim

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Tim

Sounds like your wifes away and someones missing her ... thats my read anyway ... wonderful poem little but packed with Love as is become common, you dearly love her and its sooo beautiful to read the poems you write for her like sharing someones journal thanks for that love Jayne-Chloe (http://www.neopoet.com/forum/36627-meet-n-greet-live-chat-thurs-apr-15th-9-11-pm-ny-est-host-poewriter58-welcome-new-member#comment-175177) ... Be there ~!~!~!

Tim

16 years 1 month ago

thanks for a beautiful and

thanks for a beautiful and touching comment Jayne, I'd just taken her into hospital for an operation, nothing serious, but of course I missed her! best regards, Tim