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Chance

When we first met on that dreary night,
My heart began to flutter,
Your beauty so great that at the sight,
I cold not even mutter,
You came to me and said hello,
And I stuttered hows it goin,
I could not believe that you'd choose this fellow,
And my ashtonishment was showin,
'Cause you grabbed my hand and said lets dance,
And I heard a clash of thunder,
With a simple touch you broke my trance,
And cast my world asunder,
We danced to the sounds of Garth and George,
And we spun around the floor,
The sparks a flyin as from a forge,
We headed toward the door,
The summer rain perfumed the night,
As I walked you to your car,
Oh god to me it felt so right,
Maybe thats why I bear this scar,
We kissed and said goodnight,
And I watched you drive away,
Thinking nothing of the sight,
That would greet me the next day,
For the next morning I awoke,
And as I read the obit. page,
A curse I did evoke,
A picture of my dancing lady her name I learned was Paige,
I wept like a child stung by a bee,
For this was a cruel twist of chance,
But as I cried a thought did comfort me,
At least we got to share a dance.
— zjeakin, Apr 11, 2010

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Region, Country: Crawford, Colorado

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe

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yenti

yenti

16 years 1 month ago

Tequila

Your last part of this one didn't seem to flow I have written a few words for you to have a look at to see if they would help you on this one I know it is a lot but the theme of the poem was great just the ending though sad didn't go with the rest, Hope you don't mind, Yours Ian.T Next morning I awoke with joy, Did then see the paper boy As I thumbed through the pages The orbit's did catch my sight A curse I did evoke, Couldn't believe my now clouding eyes Paige as beautiful, I could see I wept like a child stung by a bee For this was a cruel twist of chance, As I cried a thought did comfort me, At least we got to share a dance.