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mantiscepter
Apr 10, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sundial

Standing
in the sunlight
like a statue
or a shrine
 
in a beauty
consistant
passing shadows
of time

 strength
within an image
unchanging as
as one's mind

showing life's
existance
never
to unwind.


— mantiscepter, Apr 10, 2010

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yenti

yenti

16 years 1 month ago

Well Done

Young man I missed the title and had to read again then the sun came out and I could read the whole story as the shadow played with time, In its simplicity I think this is a great write and I will give it 5 Stars for its description of a world event using few words, Yours Ian.T
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mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

SUNDIAL

Well you said you were not going to me any slack, so I've been trying to be prepared... thanks for reading this poem, and for your kind comments. Mantiscepter