Windy Love

Life can be lonely for most of us, but you have me, and many people who care about you Loved. We are all individuals with our individual parts to play in life. If a dark cloud is following you around, out run it and be happy. Rosina xena465

Ann of Norway OH Rosina what a lovely thing to say to loved, "If a dark cloud is following you around, out run it and be happy." Rosina is well loved here and she has good advice for you too, we understand your desperation and need, but if you want to write good poetry you also have to stand outside yourself sometimes and suddenly you will discover the heart of you, write with that, straight out what you are feeling. I see this had another title and one which made me not wish to look at the poem beneath it, I am being honest here to you. Please excuse me. I am going to study this, but it wont be done in minutes!!! We can't all be there all the time. Yours Ann wishing you a happy day and plenty of warm sunshine, its shining here so we shall go a walk beside the still frozen lake it will be exciting I think, I will make it so anyway!!!

Ann of Norway I will address your poem but had to say this first. I am no teacher, here in Neopoets we say what we choose, to whom we choose, and we do not enjoy being goaded into doing so, the less the subject will become to our minds. I am not schooled in the language of poetry in an academic manner, it is others who are far more erudite in the finesse of poetry on this site, not I, they know its do's and don'ts. My own poetry comes as it comes and I do not often change much, I either keep it or throw it away, I only know most how to react to poetry and will not presume to teach, I may teach, but that is a natural trait inherited from teachers in my family; but to make someone else into a poet I am not qualified to do. So please be content with me visiting and making remarks that may help or not, please you or not, but do not ask of me that which I cannot give. And use plain language, do not try to make it 'poetic,' straight forward and easy to understand, that is how I speak myself with clearly said words in my English language, and if it appears poetic then that's how it came. I have no wish to offend, but had to tell you how I feel about your relentless messages and appeals, and hope very much too that I have not offended you in the process? Yours respectfully Ann.