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Apr 10, 2010
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un souffle des cheveux loin
There's a moonbeam on your shoulder.....
I watch the fingers of my mind,
touch you softly,
caressing
there's a little boy in your temples,
greying
and a sanctuary found in your heart,
beating
a breath away
Poet,
I love the strength of your lines
as you carry me across the threshold of ecstasy
like mountains, walking
sepia dreams
mute with a wilderness, wide
clouds in our eyes
falling
like rain,
filling
seas of discovery.
Uncharted islands, just a hair's breath away.
I watch the fingers of my mind,
touch you softly,
caressing
there's a little boy in your temples,
greying
and a sanctuary found in your heart,
beating
a breath away
Poet,
I love the strength of your lines
as you carry me across the threshold of ecstasy
like mountains, walking
sepia dreams
mute with a wilderness, wide
clouds in our eyes
falling
like rain,
filling
seas of discovery.
Uncharted islands, just a hair's breath away.
— Kailashana, Apr 10, 2010
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Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Mum
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
so beautiful anna
yenti
16 years 2 months ago
Anna
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Oh in love, in love you are, you are.
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Words expressed beautifully
lou
16 years 2 months ago
Reminds me
RobertKnott
16 years 2 months ago
Ahhhhh... trepidation-