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Apr 10, 2010
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Bitch Slapped
Life’s a bitch and I’m being ‘Bitch Slapped,’
Morality uppermost
I make a tiny deviation
I’m punished twofold
Dare to love, BLAM!!
A moment of weakness, KA POW!! Take that
Make a deal, promise to be steadfast
Upright and true
Life’s a bitch and I’m being ‘Bitch Slapped,’
Morality uppermost, I make a tiny deviation
I’m punished twofold
Act upon desires yet to unfold
God given emotions
Test my resolve, my will
My faculties intact
Life’s a bitch and I’m being ‘Bitch Slapped,’
Morality uppermost, I make a tiny deviation
I’m punished twofold
Heart battered and eroded
human spirit uppermost, no deviation
The bitch bites back two fold
— lou, Apr 10, 2010
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yenti
16 years 2 months ago
Lou
lou
16 years 2 months ago
hi
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
mmmm , don't mean to sound flip,
lou
16 years 2 months ago
High praise lol
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
You need a Robin, Batgirl.
lou
16 years 2 months ago
hi
lou
16 years 2 months ago
Hey thanks