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lou
lou

Bitch Slapped

Life’s a bitch and I’m being ‘Bitch Slapped,’

Morality uppermost

I make a tiny deviation

I’m punished twofold

Dare to love, BLAM!!

A moment of weakness, KA POW!! Take that

Make a deal, promise to be steadfast

Upright and true

 

Life’s a bitch and I’m being ‘Bitch Slapped,’

Morality uppermost, I make a tiny deviation

I’m punished twofold

 

Act upon desires yet to unfold

God given emotions

Test my resolve, my will

My faculties intact

 

Life’s a bitch and I’m being ‘Bitch Slapped,’

Morality uppermost, I make a tiny deviation

I’m punished twofold

 

Heart battered and eroded

human spirit uppermost, no deviation

The bitch bites back two fold

— lou, Apr 10, 2010

About This Poem

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Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

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Critiques

yenti

yenti

16 years 2 months ago

Lou

A damn good lovable piece that made me smile at the story well done can't fault it as a theme, hope you have recovered and are out Hunting again LOL why does being descret spring to mind and think before you leap also look lol, Yours Ian.T
lou

lou

16 years 2 months ago

hi

Thank you
lou

lou

16 years 2 months ago

High praise lol

Thanks Jess "Write in recollection and amazement for yourself." - Jack Kerouac
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

You need a Robin, Batgirl.

You need a Robin, Batgirl. But hey, from all life's deviations, vexations and ruminations ~~ POETRY! You go! ~A "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles
lou

lou

16 years 2 months ago

hi

Thanks
lou

lou

16 years 2 months ago

Hey thanks

I really appreciate your kind remarks. Lou